Rough cut crit went quite well for me, I even got some positive comments from Shelly Page for nice pacing and characters, plus extra points for following the brief.
I was testing some camera\bg moves here but looks like it doesn’t work – otherwise Steve wouldn’t mention to keep the stage static and don’t confuse viewer with extra movement. Also, another confusion to solve is the part with the third patient: because we don’t see him coming, we start to question why would doctor operate on himself. I’m thinking to add a siluette or something to fix it.
Usually I’m my worst critic but with this project I quite like the outcome so far. Yes, I’ve been having a lot of struggles pushing myself to unknown areas, but “no pain, no gain”, isn’t it?